中考英语一轮复习书面表达训练知识归纳总结及答案

　中考英语一轮复习书面表达训练知识归纳总结及答案

　 一、中考英语书面表达训练 1．李华的英国笔友 Jessica 来信说, 她想了解中国的传统节日中秋节。假如你是李华, 请你给 Jessica 写一封信, 介绍该节日。内容须包含以下所有要点：

　1. 中秋节的时间；

　2. 中秋节的传统习俗及庆祝方式：全家人一起吃饭, 赏月, 吃月饼等；

　3, 我最期待的活动。

　要求：1.80--100 词〔开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）；2.语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整。

　Dear Jessica,

　I"m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　Yours,

　Li Hua

　【答案】Dear Jessica,

　I"m glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15 th

　of the 8 th

　lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories.

　For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.

　 Yours,

　Li Hua

　【解析】

　【详解】

　本篇写作是以书信的方式向笔友介绍中国的传统节日中秋节，要用一般现在时来写。全文可分两大部分，第一部分写中秋节的时间、传统习俗及庆祝方式，第二部分写我最期待的

　活动。

　亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories 等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。

　 2．写作

　某英文网站的“ Student Life”栏目正在向中学生征文，标题为“ A time when I made someone happy”，请你写一篇英文稿件，内容需包括以下要点:

　1. Who was the person you made happy?

　2. When was it?

　3. What did you say or do?

　4. Why did it make him/her happy?

　5. How did you feel at that moment?

　注意：1．词数：100 左右（题目不计入总词数）。

　2.文中不得出现可能透考生真实身份的任何信息。

　【答案】Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural area.When I arrived there,I couldn"t adjust to the weather and life style.However,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letter now.

　In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.

　【解析】写作分析：这是一篇给定标题的材料作文，需要逐条完成要点问题的回答，描述一次自己让别人开心快乐的经历，是一篇记叙文，首先要读懂 5 个问题，其次要用恰当的语言和衔接手段把这五个问题的回答联系在一起，变成一篇短文，同时也要注意在描述过去的故事的时候要正确运用过去时态。

　写作亮点：既然这是一篇记叙文，就应该完整地呈现故事，需要加上必要的背景，指明时间（Last summer），地点（in rural area），简要概括事件（teach children English），这是文章首句的点睛之笔，信息量丰富。短语和固定搭配的正确使用也为这篇文章增色不少，例如“adjust to…”（调整以适应…），“as time went by”（随着时间的流逝），“made great progress”（取得巨大进步），“keep on learning”（继续学习），“In a word”（总而言之）等等短语使用正确。在收尾部分表达了作者积极的人生态度，表示如果还有机会自己还乐于参与，这样使得这篇文章结构完整，表意更加清晰。

　 3．书面表达（原创）

　今年春节，很多人加入了抢红包的游戏，但也有人表示担忧。学校英语校刊《英语天地》对此进行调查，假如你是一名校刊小记者，请你就此次调查的结果进行总结，并谈谈你自己的观点。

　 Grabbing red packets on line

　Agreement

　（75%）

　1.a popular form of entertainment, bring more fun

　2.bring people closer, make more friends

　Disagreement

　（25%）

　spend too much time.

　not have enough communication with family members, feel lonely

　 Your opinion

　1.

　2.

　提示词：We chat 微信 Grabbing red packets on line 抢红包注意：（1）词数 80 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；

　（2）文章应包括题中所提的所有要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；

　（3）文中请勿提及你的真实姓名、校名和其他真实信息;

　As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.

　___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　【答案】As we all know, grabbing red packets on line won popularity with the people during the Spring Festival in 2016. From then on, more and more people have been crazy about it. So we did the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” among students.

　About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun. It can bring people closer , they can make more friends .Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives. About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets. They don’t have enough communication with their family members .They may feel a little lonely

　Personally, there"s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form. Also, it"s obvious that it is more convenient. However, as a saying goes, each coin has two sides. It is not an exception, it also has some bad effects. If people can"t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones. What"s worse,

　it may lead to the crime.

　【解析】这篇作文要求我们对学校进行的关于春节抢红包这件事的调查结果进行总结，并谈谈自己对这件事情的看法。题目中给出了一个表格，里面包括了支持抢红包这个游戏的人们的观点以及反对这个游戏的人们的观点和理由，只给了一些短语，我们需要组织语言，将这些要点用正确的英语表达出来，并使文章内容更加丰富、完整。最后还要加上自己的看法。因此文章的内容应主要包括三部分：支持的人们的理由；反对者们的理由；自己的看法，可以分成两段或者三段来叙述，这样可以使文章结构清楚，有层次。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要逐词翻译，应从句子整体结构出发，以简单句为主，穿插并列句和复合句。为提升文章档次，还应注意使用高级句型和较复杂的句式。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文章整体意思连贯、表达流畅。

　点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整、结构清晰。文章分为三段，第一段是题目中已经给出的，因此了文章的话题。第二段中作者表述了支持和反对玩这个游戏的人们各自的理由；第三段中作者发表了自己的看法。其次短文中语言得体，句式准确，符合英语的表达习惯。文章以一般现在时态为主，特别注意了谓语动词的正确形式，语法规范、准确。短文中使用了较丰富的句型，如 About 75% of them think it is a popular form of entertainment, bring them more fun.、Grabbing red packets has been part of people’s lives、About 25% of them say some people spend too much time grabbing red packets、Personally, there"s no doubt that not only does it bring people happiness, but also send blessings to people in a special form.、If people can"t grab the red packets, people may feel sad or ill-tempered ,even break their cell phones.等等。文章中也出现了一些语法上的小错误，总的来说，不影响整篇文章的质量。

　 4． 书面表达

　共享单车（shared bikes）在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的‘“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给《21 世纪英文报》写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。

　社会现状

　自从出现，饱受赞誉。

　诸多优势

　1.随处可见，出行方便

　2.有益健康，减少污染

　3.费用不高，负担得起

　存在问题

　1.未及时归还

　2.占道挡路

　 你的观点

　我认为……（考生自拟，至少 2 点）

　 注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

　2.表格中“你的观点”一栏用 2―3 句话展开合理想象。作适当发挥。

　3.词数在 90 个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。

　Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

　 【答案】Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.

　Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it"s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What"s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.

　But there are some problems too. Some people can"t return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shared bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.

　I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, it"s a way of living a green life.

　【解析】这篇作文要求我们给《21 世纪英文报》投稿，谈一谈自己对共享单车的看法。题目中利用表格的形式给我们列举了短文的主要内容，包括：共享单车的优势；存在的问题以及你自己对这件事情的看法。前两个内容我们需要根据表格的提示用正确的英语表达，而自己的观点则需要学生们自己发挥想象力，组织语言，并表达出来，要求至少两点。通过审题可知，这篇短文应主要使用一般现在时态，第三人称来叙述，短文可以分成两段或者三段，一个内容一段或前两个内容合到一段。写作时，应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，简单句、并列句和复合句交叉使用，改变文章句式节奏，使用不同的句式，避免单调。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯、表达流畅。

　点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息。短文分成了四段，第一段引出话题共享单车；第二段讲述了共享单车的一些优点；第三段介绍了一些问题；最后一段作者提出了自己的看法。分段叙述使文章的结构清晰，主题明确，有层次性。其次短文中使用了恰当的时态和人称，文章以第三人称、一般现在时态为主，语法规范，用词准确，句式富于变化。例如 They can be seen everywhere so that it"s easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What"s more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.这几个长句；另外文章中还使用了恰当的连接成分，如 Also, What’s more, But, sometimes, After all 等等。正确文章行文连贯、语句通顺、表达流畅。

　 5．假如你叫李华，最近你班里的美国交换生 Lucy 想要感受中国的传统文化。周末你和父母商议后，打算邀请她去老舍茶馆。你通过微信告知她：要去哪，在那要做什么以及何时何地见面。

　提示词语：Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate

　提示问题：Where are you going?

　What will you do there?

　When and where will you meet?

　 【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse this Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Let’s meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.

　【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，我通过微信告诉 Lucy 要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何时何地见面。

　结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I want to……，We are going to……，We can……，Let’s meet at……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

　点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我想要邀请你去老舍茶馆，接下来介绍我们去那里做什么，最后指出我们要在何时何地见面。此处 want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

　 6．共享单车自从 2016 年在江阴投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给 21 世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。

　社会现状

　自从出现，饱受赞誉。

　诸多优势

　随处可见，出行方便

　有益健康，减少污染

　费用不高，负担得起

　存在问题

　未及时归还

　占道挡路

　你的观点

　我认为------

　 参考词汇：公共自行车 public bicycles

　注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

　2.表格中“你的观点”一栏用 2-3 句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥。

　3.词数在 90 个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总词数。

　Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

　【答案】Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that it’s easy for us to get around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. What’s more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people can’t return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public bicycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, it’s a way of living a green life.

　【解析】这是一篇材料作文，要求给英文报社写一篇投稿，介绍对共享单车看法。作文应包括 4 个主要内容，一个是社会现状，第二个优点，第三是存在的问题，最后发表个人的观点。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。要注意上下文的连贯，将这些内容有机的连接起来，不要逐句翻译。使用一些好的句型和短语，注意正确的时态和语态以及谓语动词的形式，还需要注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同，让整篇短文表达流畅。

　 7．题目②

　“持之以恒，方得始。”坚持是一种可贵的品格。生活中想要做成任何一件事情，都需要持之以恒的精神。

　某英文网站正在开展以“坚持”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈淡你在初中生活中坚持的一件事（爱好，习惯……），你是怎样做的，以及你的感受。

　提示词语：keep, practice, difficult, give up, proud

　提示问题：1. What did you do?

　2. How do you feel?

　It s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.

　【答案】It"s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.I love running and I have kept running for three years.

　When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at sports and running was always my headache.I often failed in my running test.In order to catch up with my classmates，I began to practice running every day after school.Sometimes，I was so tired that I really wanted to give up.But I kept telling myself that I could make it.No matter what kind of difficulties I faced，I tried my best to keep running.Now I do much better in running and I"m very proud of myself.I feel more confident and I"m ready for any challenges in the future.

　【解析】

　【分析】

　本篇是材料作文，根据所给提示写一篇自己在初中生活中坚持做的事；文中写明自己是怎么做的并谈谈自己的感受。

　【详解】

　1.本篇要求根据所给材料，用第一人称写初中生活中自己坚持做的一件事，根据提示，描写“What did you do?用一般过去时，描写 How do you feel?用一般现在时。书写时要紧扣主题，文句通顺。

　2.本例文开篇立即点明自己的坚持做的事是“跑步”，正文部分详细地描写了自己起初跑步总是不及格，通过克服困难、不懈地努力，坚持跑步，到现在比以前会跑；结尾谈了这件事对自己的影响；文章结构清晰，前后呼应。

　3.本例文出彩之处在于用了很多的短语和重点句型。比如：固定搭配、固定句型 It"s +adj+ for us +to do sth、love doing sth、keep doing 、be good at、 catch up with、be

　proud of；不定式 in order to；try my best to；状语从句 so…that …；比较级 do much better in …、feel more confident 等；短语多彩、文句表达多样。

　”

　 8．书面表达

　为了配合“足球进校园”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。

　常 识

　 历史悠久，深受喜爱

　世界杯 4 年举行一次

　 好 处

　 男生女生皆可参加

　利于培养团队精神

　考生自拟（至少 1 点）

　偶 像

　 梅西，有足球天赋

　 梦 想

　 考生自拟（至少 1 点）

　 注意：1. 词数 90 左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

　1.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；

　2.短文中不得真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

　参考词汇：梅西 Messi

　Dear classmates,

　I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020.

　Thank you for your attention.

　【答案】Dear classmates，

　I’m very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 football-themed schools by 2020．

　Football has a very long history．It is liked by people all over the world．The World Cup takes place every four years．Playing football has lots of advantages．First，both boys and girls can take part in it．Second，it helps develop team spirit．What’s more，playing football is good for our health．

　I’m a football fan．Messi is my hero．He has a gift for playing football．My dream is to become a famous football player like Messi．I hope China will hold the World Cup some day．

　Thank you for your attention．

　【解析】

　【详解】

　试题分析：本题要求按提纲的提示，介绍足球运动并谈谈自己的梦想。要求仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确本文主要从三个方面来写：介绍足球运动及其好处；说说自己的偶像；谈谈自己的梦想。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。

　写作亮点：本文语言精炼，像第二自然段的 Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. What’s more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，简洁，但是句意表达清楚；同时，本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作表语等等语法形式，使表达生动；用了 first, second 等使得短文层次清楚。

　 9．书面表达

　某英文报举办“家乡的变化”主题征文活动。请根据下表提示，以“The Changes in My Hometown”为题，用英语写一篇 100 词左右的短文，不必逐字逐句翻译。

　过去

　生活条件差，道路狭窄，房屋破旧。

　污染严重，垃圾遍地。

　......（适当发挥一至两点）

　现在

　环境：政府采取措施来改善污染，城市变得越来越整洁。

　生活：住房宽敞明亮；许多人搬进了新公寓。越来越多的人有自己的汽车；生活舒适。

　交通：新的飞机场已投入使用多年。be in use（投入使用）；

　旅游：每年有成千上万来自各地的游客。

　将来

　希望……（两点）

　 要求：1. 短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；

　2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，并适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；

　3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。

　Changes my hometown

　My hometown has changed a lot over the years.

　In the past,

　_______________________________________________________________

　________________________________________________________________________________

　__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　【答案】My hometown has changed a lot over the years.

　In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow. Houses were small and old. Rubbish was everywhere. Few people would like to come to my hometown. Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner. The houses are big and bright. Many people have moved into new apartments. More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life. The new airport has been in use for two years. There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.I hope my hometown is becoming more and more beautiful.

　【解析】

　【详解】

　这篇作文要求我们以 The Changes in My Hometown 为题，介绍一下自己的家乡这些年来发生的变化。题目中用表格的形式，给我们对比的家乡的过去和现在，我们应用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来，并对将来提出两点希望。审题可知，作文的基本框架和大概内容都有了，需要注意的是在描写过去的时候，需要适当发挥一到两点；还有对将来的希望也需

　要学生自己发挥。这两个地方需要学生们展开想象，合理发挥，注意要与文章的其他部分能够很好的结合起来，内容也要统一，符合题目要求，合情合理。表达时，需要注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能逐词翻译表格中的语句，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型来表达。注意句式的多变，长短句结合、简单句、并列句或复合句穿插使用，提升文章的档次。语句之间注意使用适当的连接成分，使文意连贯。

　【点睛】

　这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者按照题目要求，介绍了自己的家乡这些年来的变化。文章是按照时间的顺序，先介绍了家乡过去的面貌，这一部分使用了过去时态，谓语动词都变成了过去式，形式准确。然后是家乡现在的样子，这里主要以一般现在时态为主。最后对家乡的未来表达了自己的愿望。整篇文章内容充实、完整，叙述清晰、条理，结构合理。文章中语言得体，语句通顺，句式表达符合英语的习惯，语法规范、准确。短文里还使用了一些较好的短语和句型，如 In the past, my hometown was very poor and the streets were very narrow.、Now the government takes measures to improve the pollution and the city becomes cleaner and cleaner、More and more people have their own cars and live a comfortable life、There are thousands of tourists from all over the country every year.等等。

　 10．4 月 23 日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”的活动。假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。内容包括：应该读什么样的书，以及读书的意义。

　提示词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important

　提示问题：● What kind of books should we read?

　● Why do we read?

　Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.

　 So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.

　Li Hua

　 【答案】例文

　Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.

　So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.

　Li Hua

　【解析】

　【详解】

　题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生的倡议。

　例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，写的是阅读的好处，时态采用的是一般现在时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。

　高分亮点：

　短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。

　句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。

　 11．环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一，请以 Change for a better China 为主题，结合自己家乡的变化写一篇英语短文。

　注意事项：

　1.短文应包括表格中的所有提示内容，条理清楚，作适当发挥。

　2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名,词数不少于 80。

　状况

　水污染，大气污染......

　 应对措施

　立即阻止此类活动,治理环境（至少两条）......

　 感想建议

　环境能够变得更好......

　 Change for a better China

　____________________________________________________________________________

　____________________________________________________________________________

　【答案】We all know it is becoming more and more important to protect our environment well. But some people don’t care about it .They throw litter into the river and even worse factories also put waste into the river, the river is full of rubbish. The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days. Factories that burn coal also pollute the air with a lot of black smoke. We hardly ever see blue skies anymore.

　I think everyone in our hometown should play a part in cleaning it up. We should write to the government ,they should close down the factories. Trees are very helpful and important for the environment .We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy .Now, Our hometown has started to face the problem, I believe we can make our country a better place if we keep trying.

　【解析】

　【详解】

　环保话题是人们最关心的话题之一，请以 Change for a better China 为主题，结合自己家乡的变化写一篇英语短文。要求中已经给出了部分提示，动笔先应先认真阅读提示，确定写

　作内容。写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意在表达不同观点时，连词的使用。内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。

　【点睛】

　本文紧扣要求对家乡做了简单介绍，内容完整，用了表格中的信息。2. 句式丰富。表述灵活。衔接自然，顺畅。文中用到了一些好的句型：The air is badly polluted because there are more cars on the road these days.；We can plant more trees and more trees in order to live better and more healthy.给文中增色不少。

　 12．你是一位九年级的学生李明，你用英语写一封邮件给你的笔友 Amy，感谢她对你关心，并告诉她目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。要点如下：

　 （1）. 虽然你大部分功课你都学得比较好，但是你对自己不满意。你认为自己学习上还要多花工夫。

　 （2）. 你的父母对你严格要求，但是也很关心你。（举例说明，适当发挥 2—3 句）……

　 （3）. 老师很乐意帮助你们。他们希望你们实现自己的理想。他们说（适当发挥 2—3句）……

　注意：

　 （1）. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

　 （2）. 第 2 要点和第 3 要点要用 2—3 句话作适当发挥。

　 （3）. 词数 90 个左右，邮件开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。

　Hello!

　Dear Amy, thank you for caring.

　Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination.

　________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

　Yours

　 Li Ming

　【答案】例文 Hello!

　Dear Amy, thank you for caring.

　Now I am working hard for the senior high school entrance examination. I have got good results in most of my subjects, but I am not happy with myself. I think I must spend more time on my studies.

　My parents are really strict with me. However, they care for me as well. Once upon a time, I failed in my physics exam and felt stressed and sad. They had a close communication with me and helped me solve my problems and cheer up again.

　My teachers are also ready to help us. They hope that we can realize our dreams. They tell us to try our best and not to give up. Life is always full of ups and downs. It"s important not to be afraid of any kind of difficulty.

　How about you? I am looking forward to hearing from you.

　Yours

　 Li Ming

　【解析】

　【详解】

　本文属于材料作文，告诉艾米目前你在全力以赴为中考而学习，并与她交流一下目前的学习和生活情况。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

　亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如 get good results, spend+时间+on sth, be strict with, however, care for, as well, once upon a time, help sb do, cheer up, be ready to, tell sb to do, try one’s best to do, be full of 以及 it is adj to do sth 等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

　【点睛】

　写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：

　认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。

　构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。

　初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。

　修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。

　 13．书面表达

　初中就要毕业了，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业晚会的计划。假定你是李华，请根据要点 写一封信，说说你的计划。

　活动

　毕业晚会

　时间

　6 月 28 日晚上七点

　地点

　学校礼堂 school hall

　参与者

　全体初三学生和老师

　活动内容

　1.

　邀请校长作演讲；

　2.

　互赠礼物送祝福；

　3.

　各班表演精彩节目

　4.

　要求：1.要点完整，可适当发挥，使句子通顺，连贯;

　2.正确使用语态，语法正确，书写整洁。

　 3.80 词左右，开头结尾己给出，不计入总词数;

　4.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名。

　Dear editor,

　I am very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation party.

　____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　Best wishes,

　Yours Lihua

　【答案】Dear editor,

　I"m very happy to have the chance to show my plan for the graduation ceremony. The ceremony will be held in our school hall at 7 o’clock on June 28th.I have planned three activities for it. First of all, we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future. After that, every one give each other gifts and blessings. And then each class will give a wonderful performance. In the end, some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.

　This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.

　Best wishes,

　Yours,

　Li hua

　【解析】

　【分析】

　这篇书面表达主要是推荐自己的毕业晚会计划。

　【详解】

　这是一篇给材料作文，介绍毕业典礼活动计划。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

　 14．假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议书。

　 提示：陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到 80 岁。目前数量在减少，因为：

　1）人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园；

　2）人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。

　3）应如何保护它们（不少于三条）。

　要求：1）恰当运用比较级和最高级；2）80 词左右。倡议书的结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

　参考词汇：哺乳动物 mammal; 象牙 ivory

　Dear classmates

　_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

　I believe everyone"s contribution （贡献）

　can make a big difference.

　 Yours,

　Lihua

　【答案】Dear classmates,

　Elephants are the largest mammals on the land and they can live up to be eighty years. But now the number of the elephants is decreasing because of the following reasons. Firstly, people cut down trees in the forest, so elephants are losing their homes. Secondly, people also kill elephants for their ivory.

　As a result, we need to do something to help them. First, we should plant more trees to build the homes for elephants. Second, we can put up post on the street to tell people that it is against the law to kill elephants. Or we can also hold some activities in some public places to spread the idea of protecting the elephants.

　I believe everyone"s contribution （贡献）

　can make a big difference.

　 Yours,

　Lihua

　【解析】

　【详解】

　本文是一封倡议书,倡议大家保护大象。文章共分为三个方面的内容，首先描述大象想在所处的现状，然后说明出现这种状况的原因，最后为了保护的大象我们应该如何去做。时态主要为一般现在时。提出倡议时可以使用 We can/ We should/ Let’s...

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